Ecstasy

I can completely picture this, very nice detail. It's short but it says what needs to be said. It's an amazing poem.

"gently caressing my body"

That's my favorite line. I'm not sure why though.
The whole poem is beautiful all together. Great job
5/5

TB

Well i love the imaginary tt u have portrayed here...This poem is cleverly crafted...I can visualize the essence of the shower scene. You have certainly have a great selection of words to make the poem stnads out

Excellent Job
5/5

I was wondering about this at first,a dn then the end really surpirsed me! Good all around!

Its not totally done!! huh? im desperate its im not satisfy haha!! anyway 4/5

Ahahah.. it's a short poem but I believe it's beautiful!!! 5/5