by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion May 2, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
It starts with a young girl |
Good i lilke that your telling a complete story even though your ryhme scheme faltered a little it still flowed pretty good but i dont use rhyme schemes so i have no room to talk and it was a good work over all |
Wow! such an emotional story. very well written.... keep up the good work :-) |
I have to say this was an awesome poem, really. Looking forward to reading more... |
Hey babe this is a really good poem! deserves so much more comments! |
Wow that was full of emotion...It bought tears to my eyes I kno a giel who went thru the same thing she ended up takein her life... |