Comments : Shades of Wings

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael

    Another poem I submitted for another contest... and did not win again. Oh well; that's life, right?

    This poem also is kinda confusing, since it's based on a dream of floating on an ocean on my bed. I guess it kinda depicts being lost and cannot reach farther, even when I see it. Please rate, comment and enjoy!

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    This is another beautiful poem, your a great writer and keep up the work :]
    5/5!