by Mister 47 May 2, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In the past, i used to sit by the radio , |
by marclin
Good ... it has a resemblance in the song..... YESTERDAY ONCE MORE by THE CARPENTERS....or maybe you were inspired by the song.... |
by nina
More beatiful that the first one |
by aislynn
Your poem has a lot of errors in it, actually... too many. I like reading poems but one thing that gets really annoying is when people don't check their grammar, spelling, or capitalization. You should check your work before you put it up. Maybe you'll do better next time. |
by Colleen
I love this poem i no how you feel!!! |
by Sarah
Wow that was beautiful ... simply beautiful ! Well written and beautifully penned. It's heartfelt, honest and sweet...And behind each line lies a sad sorrowful cry...5/5 great job, keep it up |