Hunny, This poem is really good. I'm sorry that you feel this way and I'm sorry about what happened. But you are right, They are in a better place now. No more pain, No more suffering of any kind. They are happy, But don't worry, They are watching over you. I'm sure of that.

As for this poem, I give it more then a five in my heart, It was very touching and yet sad. I rate it a 5/5 on here but more then just a five in my heart.

Keep it up kiddo. Chin up and keep moving forward. Never dwell on the past, Just try making a future. Don't try changing mistakes mad in the past, Just try doing what is best for you and your future..Thats the words I was trying to say. :)

This has really good content but you should edit it a little bit. divide it up into stanzas and spell check it. other than that this one is great

Awww thats so tear jerking. hunny that poem is really powerful, a better place and you also made it sound like that by your second line in.

amazing work please keep writing and sending hugs your way xxx