Feel

Eh.. this poem is okay, a bit depressing and negative i think people should live everyday to the fullest just because. there being no tomorrow shouldnt be the only cause for going all out on life, it should be much less than that.

however, despite our differences in opinions, for commenting on just the poem itsself, its written, once again, really well and with fantastic flow

I realli like it.
my favourite part:
Spead your arms and feel like a bird,
Away from the hustle, away from the herd

because we all need to learn to do that..
xx

Nice word choice. I think you can do much better than this after seeing one of your other poems. But all in all you did an okay job.

Great choice of words in this one...it is a very good write...

We'll that was really happy up until the last line xp....it was still nice. I'm going to re read this one becuase I liked it that much!