Comments : Falling Apart

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mm nice one i like it ,

    you had better oprganised one ,

    i hope you are not getting really weak :)

    i hope to see more HOPE inside :)
    hehe

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Will I ever find the end of this path?

    yes and there will be a light thre shining and you will smile

    keep writing xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Great poem