Wow i like this lots its really good. its strange because i truly believed they were true when i was a kid adn then you work it out

I actually get this poem. its true, fairy tales are just make believes but in a way they are sometimes good to escape too. love the job well done xxxx

Love it <33
you'r right,, things never work out in the ennd :/

I can tell that you put a lot of thought into this. Good Job. I do want to tell you one thing though... Things do work out...if you do what's right...I know I sound like a parent, but I've been down a hard road recently, and I have learned the hard way, that a lasting happiness is possible! When you're doing things you know you're not supposed to do... yeah, it won't go the way you want to. I've learned that. No, I don't really believe in happily ever afters, but I do believe that we can have happiness that lasts forever. Yes, there will be pot holes along the road, some that may take a while to get over them, but they will end... Death is not the answer, neither is dwelling on that negativity... but looking for the good that's all around you, if you only look for it, and being the best person you can be will give you that happiness that we all look for. I've learned that it's NEVER too late to change your life for the better. And there will always be people willing to help you along the way. Hey, I'd like to chat... If you want to know how to get the happiness that lasts forever, I'd love to chat with you about it. :) If not, I'd still like to just talk, just go to my page and leave me a message and I'll get back to ya as soon as I can. :)

Sorry, I guess it posted twice. oops.

This is a wonderful poem...though i have a fairytale of my own different from all u have ever heard...i still want it to come true...though i know what you mean by tht poem and sincerely hope tht someday ur fairytale comes true as well... good ppl deserve good... and by the way i percieve this poem and the thought i think you are a warm hearted and nice person, maybe hurt... if u ever need ears... try mine... neway.. excellent write 5/5 ...it was awesome !!

I love this poem. it made me laugh. its twisted into a fairytale nightmare where there is no happy endings. and i agree that the world is full of lies.

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Omg! I love your poem! Its cute. And so dame true! I hate fairy tales. Cuz life never goes that way. Theres no prince charming or fairy godmother or happily everafter. I was thinking about that the other day. The poems well written, made me laugh, and I can't thank you enough for putting it into words I could never say. Stupid fairy tales....lol. Great poem!

So true, but in this life we have so much pain, misery, and heartaches. Let us leave fairytales alive..it is the only place where we can still be princess, where my prince can still sweep me off my feet...where we can still love and live happilly ever after...

Wow.. this poem is so ture.......... I love it!

Haha this poem was good. great flow, had me smiling the whole way through. never really thought of fairy tales like that :)
well done, kept me interested from the first line 5/5

Really very beautiful and creative idea, of showing how adults used to trick us by untrue fairy tales , i liked that a lot , go on .

Amazing.

I agree with other comments, you clearly put a lot of thought nto this poem, and it came out beautiful.

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WOW thats pretty much all i can say.... this was an extremely good read....very thoughtfully written....this is going straight to my favorites....

10/10 i look forward to reading more of your work

~Love Always Jessica Marie~

Lol, this was a great poem, so funny, so true and so sad. It made me laugh, this is one of my favorites that you wrote. Because it made me want to cry because thats how life really is, and it made me laugh because thats how life really is. isnt it ironic? lol. great poem, i give it 2 thumbs up and a 5/5

Wat an amazing poem. i loved how you releted all the lies to the oh so happily ever after fairytales. It was truly an amazing poem and it really got grabbed your attention

Amazing work, i love it coz youve taken something familiar to everyone and put a different light on it, amazing writing. i love th last part "Fill our heads with nonsense,
And let us work it out." keep up the great work