Yes never give up love this is a 5/5

I really enjoy you writing.I opens my eyes to a new form of doing so,therefore you are quite an insperation.Keep doing what your doing cause it's the right thing to do ;)

*it,lol,typo

Crazy how so many get confused by LUST

THis is line is so TRUE :)
nice Lines :)
keep it up....

5/5 *Clap*

I think your idea holds merit but ift seems your rythm gets choppy Do you mean to use the word "feet"? Also is your weakness to "love and to trust" or to do these without thought?

Wonderful flow 5/5

You are so strong, good flow, excellant job

This is really good - just so you know tho the way you used "feat" its not spelled "feet" anyway great writing :)