I Dare You

Wow, very strong poem. I like this. I like the repetativness of "I dare you" After every action.

Bad and good.

Bad first?
Alright.

It could be that throw

It sounds wrong.
Try... "It could be that THAT throw"

Honestly?
I think at some points you took things too far.
Like, burning and drowning you?

It doesn't fit in with the poem.

At least that's what I think.

But other than that...

I didn't like this poem as much as the other.

Probably because I disagree with it.

Quote: "No Matter What.
I Will Still Be Who I Am."

In my belief,
Experience molds and changes a person.
We don't know who we are yet.

Really enjoyed this read, good message, well versed. Thought, I would enjoy reading this with the last line of the first stanza replacing all the last lines(repetitive).

Very well written...
The repetition of 'I dare you' really leaves an impact on the reader....i like the message behind the poem... no matter what you wont change...you will still be who you are...

Hit me.
Whip me.
Throw me.
Lie to me.
Burn me.
Drown me.
I Dare You!

No Matter What.
I Will Still Be Who I Am.

^^ the last lines are so powerful..
beautiful write..

Very good work! I enjoyed the message and the structure you used to deliver it. I thought your flow is fine as it stands