K WOW yeah I gotta a lot to say about this one

Um for the start I like how you start your first line with the title of your poem

Secondly, the poem has a strong vocabulary which makes the emotion CRAZY But the flow isn't necessarily ALL THAT

That would be my only work on it for you

So yeah great work 4/5

Wow. Thats an amazing poem full of tons of emotion. Its great!

Great work. this is one of my favorites of yours because it seems to be more raw than some of the others. awesome!