Mummy mummy!! help help!!

by Baby Rainbow   May 3, 2008


Mummy, mummy
help, help!!
monster, monster
scared, scared!!

mummy, mummy
i weed the bed
monster shouted
wants me dead

mummy, mummy
stop hitting me
i want a cuddle
cant you see?

mummy, mummy
you're hurting my ears
your shouting so loud
one of my fears

mummy, mummy
I'm sorry i wee
i get so scared
I'm only three

mummy, mummy
where'd you go?
please don't leave
monster will know

mummy, mummy
it's so black
oh no hide me
the monsters back!

saffie
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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    WOW. This is so catchy, sad, emotional, powerful and very very beautiful. I loved it. This is one of my faves. Well written, 5/5. Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    Awww...i loved it...i cn relate...due to a family history...very natural...

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Great poem. The usage of words fit perfectly along the context and the idea of it was simply amazing yet sad.
    Good job.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Ive got goosbumps all over hun....this is so sad, but so many children will feel exactly how you described in your poem and thats what makees it so sad....

  • 16 years ago

    by Im Not Emo

    This is very different then what i'm used to reading, enjoyed the uniqueness :)