Ive got goosbumps all over hun....this is so sad, but so many children will feel exactly how you described in your poem and thats what makees it so sad....

Great poem. The usage of words fit perfectly along the context and the idea of it was simply amazing yet sad.
Good job.
5/5

Awww...i loved it...i cn relate...due to a family history...very natural...

WOW. This is so catchy, sad, emotional, powerful and very very beautiful. I loved it. This is one of my faves. Well written, 5/5. Em