Comments : I may

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenn

    I enjoyed reading this. I especially like the lines, "I may become unexpectedly angry

    for no good reason or for every reason in the world."

    A suggestion, maybe you'll want to change the word "then" in "I may be sadder then I thought possible." to the word "than"

    Thank you for sharing

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I may be afraid without knowing what I fear.
    this line really stands out xxx

    this poem is good and i think a lot can read that and feel that way too. but we also becme better poeple from what we go through and learn from what we experience.

    keep writing xxx