I like it. I think it represents the pain that all of us feel and we know that once we have been changed we can not go back, it's how we lose our innocence. you should make it a song, that's how i read it, i sang it aloud. really, really sad in a true way.

If this is the definition of a broken heart..i'm living it...oh joy.

Do you have another method?
Reader, what do you do?
Screaming silent confessions?
Are they too good for you?

^^ .....it's really really hard, jesse, to silently confess..and sometimes, that's what kills us the most...

5.5

((i'm not back yet...trying really hard to fix the stupid computer))

Aww thats really well written, very deep and strong worded. great job keep writing xxx