"No matter which direction I turn, It will always be wrong
So tell me what does it matter if I am weak, or if I am strong,
I tried so hard to make your day, but nothing I do seems right,
Should I give up, or prolong this fight,I feel my chest growing tight,"

this is my fave stanza!!!

well done girls..i really like this one, its so powerful and the emotion is there and she show real feeling. the whole thing works well together!!

LOVE IT

xoxo

"You've driven me to insanity, And my screams are screamed in vein."

One of the greatest lines and wordplays I've ever read...awesome writing here! I loved it--the emotion is only made stronger through your choice of words. I think this would be an amazing song if ever put to music...