I can appreciate the feeling behind the words...
Maybe it wouldn't hurt to clean up the spelling a bit, it makes it easier to understand.
I like this bit:

"all i am is an ordinary girl
whose life is spinning
like a tilt-a-whirl."

because I really feel that way myself sometimes, that it's not me who's strange, it's the things that are happening in the world I happen to live in!
By the way, what's a tilt-a-whirl? Or is it a concept?

Take care

//T.L.//