Reality

by tears in heaven   May 3, 2008


When you see me, i smile,
to hide the pain.
it appears that things are fine,
but that is my game.
i am i a hiding,
that i want nobody to see,
for that is my reality.
at night i cry myself too sleep.
th ocean between us is 100 feet deep.
there's a cloud over my head,
it's pouring rain,
dont worry things are fine,
lets begin the game.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Wow this was really good. I could feel the flow of emotiong in every line. You did a great job with this piece and you deff have talent. Keep it up =]
    5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    I like it
    i tend to hide my feelings from ppl a lot myself
    sometimes its cause i feel weak sometimes its cause i think they wont understand and sometimes i just feel like i cant talk to any of them about it
    i think its good t owrite about it cuz if u hold everything thing in for too long it never turns out well
    4.5/5
    =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Well done !! that was really nice. I think its deep though it is short, but the meaning and the emotions expressed in the words are perfectly shown.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is really good well done xxx

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