Well done excellent poem 5/5

I really enjoyed this one.. It sent chills up my spine! The flow was just about perfect and the words were so true. I think you're a wonderful writer and I enjoy reading your work, thanks for sharing this with everyone. =)
-Ally

There are so many wonderful parts to this poem, it would be hard to pick a certain stanza out but I am partial to this one
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So continue on , and know that you're not alone ,
As I am always by your side!
When you exchange the heavy load you carry,
you'll be more than satisfied !
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Your poems are very inspirational. A comfort to read

Every verse is excellent but I think this one would be the one that I like more.

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So continue on , and know that you're not alone ,
As I am always by your side!
When you exchange the heavy load you carry,
you'll be more than satisfied
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When things in life get rough, I always remember that God is by my side and I am not alone and that He nevers gives me more than I can handle. When I surrender the rough things to Him, the heavy load is lifted. Thanks for writing such wonderful words that inspire if only people will listen to the words as they read them.

I liked this poem. The word usage was good and it flowed nicely. It got the message across.

5/5