Comments : Dead Alive

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Perfect as always. This was so imaginative and beautifull. Your poems are always filled with such pain. Your amazing.

    -forever your biggest fan
    (M3)LL0 oneninethree

  • Chilling....i like! keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by morgan

    Really goood!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Sometimes that happens to me, I don't feel alive yet I live... like a dream.
    It all flows nicely and the words are well picked... good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Amazing job! im speechless! :)

  • 15 years ago

    by jojo88

    Thats cool 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Love the vividness of it. It makes u wonder how it would be like to "not live but not be dead" either.
    lovely onve again.

    victoria