The Daisy

Much more could have been added to this piece it could have been built upon.

I like this one for the image.

Very cute and sweet. I think the length was perfect. The daisy only has so many petals.. so in reality the poem couldn't have gone on much longer, it would have defeated the whole purpose. I think you did a great job.

Hi, i disagree, i think it being small, or short is all the point, small and plain, just like the daisy, liked it, well done..p

I had to read this since daisies are kind of my favorite flower...I liked it a lot. short but sweet.