Comments : The Daisy

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very cute, I felt like there could be more, just because it was so good! Nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!..this was really nice!..totaly loved it!
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    I had to read this since daisies are kind of my favorite flower...I liked it a lot. short but sweet.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Hi, i disagree, i think it being small, or short is all the point, small and plain, just like the daisy, liked it, well done..p

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Very cute and sweet. I think the length was perfect. The daisy only has so many petals.. so in reality the poem couldn't have gone on much longer, it would have defeated the whole purpose. I think you did a great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    I like this one for the image.

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    Much more could have been added to this piece it could have been built upon.