My Mind's Place

by H E Losey   May 3, 2008


Within my mind lies a special place
Reserved for thoughts from my heart
Within my mind lies a special place
A place where we never part

Within my mind lies a special place
As peaceful as heavens above
Within my mind lies a special place
A place of hope and love

Within my mind lies a special place
A land made just for two
Within my mind lies a special place
A place I share with you

Within my mind lies a special place
Reserved for thoughts from my heart
Within my mind lies a special place
A place where we never part

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  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment upon my words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ridd1ck Yulas

    A good poem but very simple very repetitive. not very creative at all. how ever it was good and got the point across

  • 16 years ago

    by S R P

    Wow.. just wow. I really enjoyed this poem, it was amazing. It portrayed great thoughts and feelings perfectly. Thank you for sharing

  • 16 years ago

    by Sean

    I wasn't sure what to think of this, i enjoyed it but i struggle with the repetition every two lines. it might benefit from a subtle but well placed change at the finishing line maybe or the start of each stanza.

    i particulary liked the 3rd stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    I really liked this a lot,I think we all have a special place in our heart for someone.good rhymes and flow.

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