by Deana
I really liked this a lot,I think we all have a special place in our heart for someone.good rhymes and flow. |
by Sean
I wasn't sure what to think of this, i enjoyed it but i struggle with the repetition every two lines. it might benefit from a subtle but well placed change at the finishing line maybe or the start of each stanza. |
by S R P
Wow.. just wow. I really enjoyed this poem, it was amazing. It portrayed great thoughts and feelings perfectly. Thank you for sharing |
A good poem but very simple very repetitive. not very creative at all. how ever it was good and got the point across |
by H E Losey
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment upon my words. |