Very well written acrostic poems though A is more common most of us would prefer the B type |
Nice. I liked how you contrasted the good and the bad. Very creative. 5. |
by ALEX
I'm very much a fan of both of these together. How "A" is negative while "B" is positive. Personally, I know nothing about marriage, but I can see from your poems that you need to remember both views. :) I like it very much. |
I really enjoyed the style of this. It's different and I liked it. Plus it gave a general idea and shot emotion even though you used a total of about 18 words. That is skill. Much respect due 5/5 |
by Bugg
This is great. I'm getting married in a few years and I would love for our marriage to be mostly B, though I'm sure at times it will be A. lol I liked how you contrasted them. Alot of people usually think about marriage as being one or the other and not both. 5/5 |
by Until Again
This was fun. Flip sides, I like it. |
What I really like about this poem, is its uniqueness. I don't think I have ever seen anything like this but this is very creative, and I thought it was great! Also, I like how you did a comparison between the positives and negatives of marriage. Good work. |
by Katie
That's neat! Acrostics are very nice done right. Here it is! |