This poem is so powerful, hun. not only is it sad, it's angry. and it's hurt...

she lives in silence
her whole world in a blur

^^ this is so relatable..so so relatable. it made me wanna cry, reading this. you shouldn't have to feel this, loves...it's unfair.

5.5

Wow! I love this! so much emotion ... emotion with power! You did an amazing job with this! 5/5 keep it up!

Very very good!
I especially like the line
"you were her posion, her gun, her knife"