This poem is amazing and if that message is true then your dad will know and he will see that love is stronger that the sea, don't be scared what other people say this is you life and you love this person=) anyway this poem is amazing=)

This is very original and i really like it.

I love the way you've taken a compelty different slant to your usual poems here. very good - good stereo-typing crushing writing. ye i sound too political now. basically i'm trying to say it is amazing

This has a very different style and rhythm to it, the love felt is sweet and pure and it sends a clear messege to the dad from the heart.
Nice one.

Nice i like it better yet i love it...
you talk about me so in depth
10 out of 5