Comments : IF I AM TO SURVIVE

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Another McMillian great. I love this stanza

    For Change is but the death of the old,
    And the birth of the new!
    Though Changes are always necessary,
    they often are too few!

    Your poems really reach me and are an easy read. They flow and rhyme and are wonderful dear friend. This would be a sad place with out your beautiful poems

  • 16 years ago

    by JD

    To be born at your own funeral is surely an odd subject to ponder.
    this poem made me think, maybe death isnt that bad.
    im still very afraid of it, but the concept of changing; being born as someone new; is amazing.
    im not sure if thats what you were thinking when you wrote the poem... but thats what it made me think.
    i think its always good to have open poems like this that can offer a ton of opinions and ideas.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sylvia

    The two verses that touched me the most:

    Too little , too late , or not at all,
    On time they seldom arrive!
    But Change, I see , is what I must,
    If I am to survive !

    For Change is but the death of the old,
    And the birth of the new!
    Though Changes are always necessary,
    they often are too few!

    If we are to grow, we must constantly change and strive to be a better person each and every day with Gods help.