Dear freind

by trinity   May 3, 2008


Dear Friend don't forget me is what she said
as she lay on her death bed
you can't leave is what i cried
and then she died

she said no good by
left such a broken tie
her poetic word of the world were just a pretty lie
thats when i truly died

i was young this shattered my world
i was abandoned throw into a unknown place
i never let a nother tear fall down this once inesant face

i grew into a figure in the back ground
on which every one frowned
lost in that world that was lost such a long time ago
but know one was to know

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  • 16 years ago

    by An Angel in the Darkness

    I agree good job. Watch your tenses tough you seem to throw them in some of your poetry

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is really good, well done xxxx