by CrystAl May 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Your always on my mind every second every minute of my time. I'm lost without you i dont know what to do. You were my guidance the only person i could confide in. You were on my team but i didnt know what that mean. I turned you away now you are on my mind each and every day. Now im feeling blue all because im thinking of you. What i had and what i lost now liveing without you is the cost......... |
by CrystAl
ThAnkXx |
I really enjoyed this poem. you might want to think about seperating the lines into stanza's though. But still overall a great poem. 5/5 |
by CrystAl
ThanKs.....but mY poEms arE not abOut mE ivE nEver bEen in loVe.......thEy arE abOut othEr peoplE |
by Brad Quammen
This poem was rather sad.It reminds me of some poems I've written in the past.None the less,this was a great poem ;)...keep on writing! :) |