Comments : Dream

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This is actually really relatable.

    because then i wake up in my little cold bed
    with all thats night tear shed

    ^^ eventually, my dear, you'll run out of tears to cry. and then you'll be angry and bitter...don't let yourself come to taht. try so hard. it's so hard..

    you might wanna run the spell checker over the poem. other than that, great job, hun.
    ^.^