Comments : Everyday Thing

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    OMG!
    this made me smile it was sooooo cute. great job kayla..i miss you and will be back as soon as i get my computer fixed.

    *hugs*
    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This was really sweet hun, I love it as usual.

    'Getting up early in the morning,
    Extra time to fix my hair.
    I step back and think to myself,
    "Who knows, he might care."'

    ^ I liked this stanza the most, it related to my life only in a different context.

    Overall this was a lovely poem, and well written by a talented poet.

    Awesome job hun,
    5/5 --Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cubanbabi

    I totally know how you feel Kayla...
    i really like someone and im never going to see him again. we're going to different schools and he says hes nver coming back.
    i really like him and he like me.
    just like you said when hes around i can hardly breath. i cant even talk i say stupid things that i later regret. thanks 4 writing this poem its good to know that im not the only one who feels this way>>ur som1 i can relate 2 :)