This piece is beautiful.
Very emotional and moving.
The flow is pretty good.
I love your use of the word 'obscene'.
Overall, amazing.
5/5

In all your poems you have the same rhyme scheme which makes the poem flow from one word to the next. Your a really good poet. Keep it up. Your writing is very good. Very descriptive which makes the reader want to read more of your work. Good job! keep it up!

I liked it, it flowed into itself rather well and went verse to verse in a flow even from last to first ^_^ (I have a habit of reading forward, then backward)

Well done i reallly like the feel of this =)

I love this!! it is very flowing and fulent!!