Comments : Please

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Wow..this was really good. it had a really strong power to it.
    i could feel your grief and pain.
    i really hope you dont really feel that lonely.
    ...
    anyways good Job!
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very poewrful work here, the words flowed very well and made the poem enjoyable to read.

    excellent xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Conrad

    I try but the waves i swim are growing stronger-should be"swim THROUGH"
    that guides me though- should be GUIDE
    please by the hand to lead me- Should be BE
    please by my courage- Should be BE

  • 16 years ago

    by Conrad

    That's a great poem you have there. Puts mine to misery.