by Another Lost Hero May 4, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You looked me in the eyes, |
by Baby Rainbow
Aww thats really good, you have made it flow pretty well, the opening was a bit slow but it quickened up and i enjoyed this and loves the repeated chorus effect, that wrks pretty good. |
Hey l think this is an amazing poem, l think all everyone can relate to this. Maybe some of the couplets were abit forced but it is still great poem. |