You looked me in the eyes

by Another Lost Hero   May 4, 2008


You looked me in the eyes,
You said were through,
Said I told too many lies,
But you lied about that too,
You said you're sorry,
But you just don't like me,

I did all that I could do,

I see you in the crowd after school,
I turn the other way,
Just to see that your there too,
I hate that I still want you,
After how you treated me,
I write all of these words down,
In hopes they set me free,

And if you don't know who you are,
Well ignorance is bliss,
You took this way too far,
And then sealed it with a kiss,
I don't know who you are,
Like you've died and gone away,
You played with my emotions,
So I'm putting them away.

Laying on my back on the train,
Looking at the stars,
Like they're the ones to blame,
Wondering how this could've happened,
Wondering why this had to be,
How could I ever trust you now,
after what you did to me?

And if you don't know who you are,
Well ignorance is bliss,
You took this way too far,
And then sealed it with a kiss,
I don't know who you are,
Like you've died and gone away,
You played with my emotions,
So I'm putting them away.

PLEEAAAAAAASE tell me what you think. if you have any hints let me know as well

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww thats really good, you have made it flow pretty well, the opening was a bit slow but it quickened up and i enjoyed this and loves the repeated chorus effect, that wrks pretty good.

    well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Dion Avramides

    Hey l think this is an amazing poem, l think all everyone can relate to this. Maybe some of the couplets were abit forced but it is still great poem.