Thats really good actually, each line is powerful on its own and thats a good skill to have in poetry i think.

it flowed well and was a good read. well done x

Wow... nice ending... the last part made the poem really interesting... I cant say this is your best poem.... bt u r very talented no doubt.. :)

"I run to you in what seems like slow motion
And I feel like I'm trying to breathe in the ocean."

^^ I like the way you tried to express the feeling as similar to breathing in ocean... the pain could be felt...

good write...