Comments : Uphill Battle

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    And were fighting an uphill battle
    The one you fight until you die
    No more laughing
    No more crying
    Its bottled up inside
    Were fighting an uphill battle
    Trying to escape the lies
    Only pain
    Only dieing
    Let me hear your battle cry

    great poem this is my favorite part!!!
    good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Let go of all your hurt,
    Let go of every lie,
    We can make it work,
    If all we do is try,
    Let go of revenge,
    Let go of your pride,
    We can fight the battle,
    We dont don't to die,

    brilliant.

    thisis amazing, keep up with your work!! xx