Thought and trial

by amber   May 4, 2008


All this time i had sat in a corner and watched the world go bye and all this time i was slowly melting and waisting away. the pain that had built up inside of my heart finally burst. like no other feeling before i was scared of what might come from this ,and what i could do to change what i had been threw. so that maybe i would never have to go threw this again.

this dark sensation, heavly rising to the max that i could handle. i began to think that i have no way to easily remove this pain but to hold all this in.

but i was wrong..........................

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  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    Thank you that means alot to me i hate when i feel like this cause i almost love the one that i love over how i feel and i can not control this. but i really need to learn how.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Oh cliff hanger ending, good work x

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Good job 5/5
    i have been feeling this way all week.. i know it's hard and i to and just ready to find a releas for this pain