Comments : Cheats, heartbreak and deadlysins~My heartbreakers

  • 16 years ago

    by shadowknight

    Wow!
    This is a great poem.
    Though at some points its a bit too long (Sortof dragging on, it was great
    My fav line is
    what is this feeling you cursed me with,
    as you told me that love filled myth.

    Great rhyme work and a great first poem!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by REESEY

    OMG..........THAT WAS GREAT.......