by BrokenREALiTy May 4, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Haunted silhouettes loom throughout the streets, |
by Kaila
I actually enjoyed this poem |
Like I mentioned before, your writing style is very unique, but it works. Like you said, the ending is a bit weak and you should try to polish that up, and as Mesroth said it was also premature. This poem could be so much better if you would add a few more stanzas to it. But I must admit that I love your word choice and how you piece this poem together. Nice work. 5/5 |