Do you know what happens behind closed doors?

by she   May 4, 2008


Bloody bruises are created upon young skin tonight,

a fragile little girl slices into her flesh for the first time tonight,

a distorted image of a girl,
with her mothers words burning through her head, reaches down her tender throat, again, for what she says is the last time tonight.

every night a piece of our hurting youth, our generation dies, so will you do something?

will you?

they're screaming for your help,
don't tell me you're just going to tune them out

will you remain naive,
and simply refuse to open your eyes?

or will you do somthing,
please stop their pleading
but hurry
it's almost night!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Excellent opening, good description hunny.

    this is a really touching subject and one it hink needs to be written more about for people to understand. keep writing you express the words so well hun xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow, babe, just like...wow.

    a fragile little girl slices into her flesh for the first time tonight,

    ^^ God...i remember something so similar to that..only it happened the middle of the day.

    Monique, sorry I've gotten behind in commenting, i feel bad. i'm doing the best i can to keep up. this poem is so sad, hun....it's wonderful, bittersweet.

    *hugs*

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Hm interesting. Very creative and original yet powerful and full of emotion and truth, Fairly short yet the message makes up for any variety of length or description. Great write keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Very unique, i love it
    creative as ever

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