Very good poem,wish I could write like that with such passion as you do.I'm looking forward to seeing many more from you >:D< :-*

This poem can relate to many people, there are always people willing to push others down for their own benefit. You really touch that topic with strong words. What got to me was
"If this is all you wanted, then you have everything.
But this everything that you have,
Is nothing. "
Because..no matter what you label success in life, it doesn't actually amount into anything if you've no one.
5/5