OMG!!..i have no idea what it said..but i think the language is awsum!!
lol
Aly

Shivali,
You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali,
You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali,
You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali,You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Shivali,You have done a great job here.I liked it very much.Zindagi(Life) always makes us realize whether we are alone or full of supports.Sometimes we expect a lot but find little.But it always tells us truth whether bitter or sweet.It is a reflective poem.We always live in conflict whether we need life or life needs us.But truth is that both are incomplete without each other.A very beautiful poem.

Very beautiful poem .. well written...
but i felt the rhythem was a little off in the middle... but I really appreciate the way you have described out your feelings..

It was a good read...

keep writing..

I loved it! i didn't know we could submit poems here in any language other than english but now i do. Thanx for that! Btw u expressed ur emotions really well! Good work:) Keep it up

Nice.......... too poetic
5/5

Zindagi...... Bohot khoob...

I liked this one... though a few write hindi poems over here... I m lucky to find sumone more who writes hindi poems...

Good write... keep it up...

best wishz... Karan

I went to a translater online for this one but it was worth the effort, i really liked this poem it was a very good write ^^