You

by Nathanilliam   May 4, 2008


You keep me going those long nights at work,
you keep my spirits buoyed up.
you make me laugh, you make me last
through the dark and dreary night.
without you my day is black, just like it used to be
before that fateful and amazing trip
where we became fast friends.
our friendship burst forth, growing quick,
my best friend, you mean the world to me.

i wrote this far in math class and couldn't remember where i was going with this, so I just posted it how it was.

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    This is a very sweet poem
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I like this poem, Me and my best friend are like that....Very good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle Lynn

    Wow this was a really good poem! I wish I had a friend like this. I gave it a number 5!

  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    I really like cant wait to see when its finished

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    *smiles*
    That's really all I can do for this one. It was such a nice happy poem. Makes me smile and feel good. It's one of those poems that I'll read when I'm having a down day.

    Great write. Please remember where you were going with it, because I want to read some more. =)

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