Just Another Cloudy Day

by Conrad   May 5, 2008


You were in my dreams today,
as I sat by and watched the world.
The sky was grey and no birds flew.
And all the while I thought of you.
Wind in your hair, atop a castle.
Holding there, watching life as I was.
One giant eclipsing the sun.
You watched the epic battle atop your castle.
The mighty sun against this gargantuan.
The beast held for hours, then the sun broke through.
The day was won.
When I awoke the rain had stopped.
The battle was won.
And the day ahead,
had just begun.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    I really likd your poem cause you really made me imagine the scence, we all need to imagine once in a while :).
    keep it up 5/5

  • I really like this did a good job and expressed your self really well excellent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Cute and quirky little poem, with good imagery and good vocabulary. thanks for the tip on the spelling hadn't even noticed x