Id

by H E Losey   May 5, 2008


I
Who am I?
No one knows
No one seems to care

A boy am I?
No, some say a man
No one knows
Perhaps no one dares

In love am I?
Yes, but still alone
Oh she knows
But she is never there

Who am I?
Perhaps I'm you
No one knows
No one seems to care

Published 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Clever work, well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by peter

    I have read all your submissions, each a small offering, But you haven't dug down and penned anything other than skin deep, almost just playing, what would be good take us on a journey with depth, Push yourself stretch the imagination........A challenge..?

    Regards
    Peter

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    One question, why is it titled Id? Ohhhh you mean ID, as in identification. Gotcha, never mind.

    I liked it. I liked how you started the first line with 'I'. I'm also quite partial to the beginning each first line of each new stanza with a question. It's a nice hook.

    5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I like the simplicity of this poem... simple but deep... n meanigful...

    keep writing..

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