I like the simplicity of this poem... simple but deep... n meanigful...

keep writing..

One question, why is it titled Id? Ohhhh you mean ID, as in identification. Gotcha, never mind.

I liked it. I liked how you started the first line with 'I'. I'm also quite partial to the beginning each first line of each new stanza with a question. It's a nice hook.

5.

I have read all your submissions, each a small offering, But you haven't dug down and penned anything other than skin deep, almost just playing, what would be good take us on a journey with depth, Push yourself stretch the imagination........A challenge..?

Regards
Peter

Clever work, well done xx