by H E Losey May 5, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The seasons of the years go past |
Same as the other one when it comes to punctuation. Other than that I really enjoyed it. I'm rather fond of the last stanza. 5. |
by x Mo x
That was a nicely relaxed poem. It brings back nice feelings in me. There was a vague imagery that sort of blossomed. |