Aw that reminds me of home here in the summer. It's a nice peaceful feeling. It makes me want to stay here all summer. I love how you write with true feelings.

Great write!

I noticed no one responded to your little ad in the request area, at least not for all to see in there. Anyways. Here ya go.

Ooo nice. Claps* The only thing I have to say to improve upon is consistancy with punctuation. I felt there could have been a few commas and periods here and there. Other than that it was brilliant.

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