I like how you kept it short, it makes it more powerful. Good perception of the difference between looking at someone, and realy seeing them.

Very short but well written, i loved it
i give it a 5

Its so short yet its so powerful. I love it. Just amazing.

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i likes it.
short and good.

This piece is not only short and sweet, but also powerful.
This poem really stands out to me.
I'm truely surprised that your poem can be so short but say so much.
Fantastic work.
5/5

Short. nice. to the point. made sense. gave me a smile =].

over all ill give it a 5/5

Very interesting, seen it before but everytime I read poetry like this it's always a surprise and original, very powerful yet short, keep it up I'm looking forward to reading more.

I liked the shortness of this poem, however; I also felt that you could've elaborated and made this into a longer poem which would've suited it better in my opinion.

Also, You didn't use any puncuation. Puncuation helps the flow as well as the overall structure of the poem.

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Just look at me
Really look at me
Look not in my eyes
But in my soul
For if you look there
Your soul will find its mate.

^^Ok as I stated above puncuation is a big part of poetry, so for example:

Just look at me,
Really look at me.
Look not in my eyes
But in my soul;
For if you look there
Your soul will find its mate.

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Short and to the point, nice little write, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Nicely written. Short, sweet but still with a melodic effect overall. Keep it up! 5/5

Wow I really liked this one!
5/5 keep it up!